August 25, 2013 Megan
Massey
Denver Post
3452 Denver Ave.
895 Denver, CO
Dear John Steinbeck,
While I was reading your article I agreed and disagreed with
some of things you mentioned. It was great to see someone else’s point of view
that was so strong and dedicated in what they believe in.
The way this article was written I thought was very creative
because it made me think about how we do act in America. At the same time there
are a lot of positives that happen in America and a lot of us don’t realize. When
you were writing this article I think that you should have had some positives
followed by some negatives.
There was something that really stood out to me and that is
when you said how greedy Americans are. When you stated, “ We fight our way in,
and try to buy our way out” (Steinbeck) I agreed completely because we are so
greedy and fight for what we want but then when we don’t want it anymore or we
are in trouble we try to buy ourselves out of it.
“Our lives would not function without electricity.” (Steinbeck)
completely relates to me because everything that all Americans do revolves around
electricity in some way, whether it is transportation, communication, and
basically every other important (and non-important) activity we partake in.
This article takes multiple perspectives on the American
dream ad the lifestyles of Americans. It shows some of the positives (which in
my mind, outweigh the negatives overall) that come with living in the country
and some drawbacks as we move from generation to generation. As the country
grows older, and becomes more technologically developed, our morals and values
changed. Our views seem to be more focused upon technologically-based
activities, and less on what used to be the essential skills and knowledge to
make it in America.
I feel like you should have put an example that you disagreed with, but over-all you did a good job when showing your opinions on what Steinbeck said and relating them to your actual life.
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ReplyDeleteYou start your letter by saying you agree and disagree with the things he mentioned. But you only talked about what you agreed with. Make sure you fix that for your final copy. Other than that nice job! Good use of multiple quotes.